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1. What is the most effective way to improve your evaluation and reach Level 3?

Overall Quality: Good (Amber)

You have a very clear structure and understand the sources. To reach the top level, you need to move from explaining the arguments separately to directly comparing them against each other.

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Instead of just stating what Jenkins says, compare it instantly: "While Jenkins correctly argues for the benefits of flexibility, Chen effectively counters this by highlighting the dangerous lack of scrutiny rapid laws face..."

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